Saturday, October 3, 2015

uNTIL

Photo by Katie Jenkins Kester

Until you have uncorked
your carotid, unleashing a flow
of metaphorical images
beyond your explanation,

      ones that make children
      dance with anticipation and
      adults quake with anxiety;

until you shake punctuation around
   like it's going out of style
      so people are forced
         to negotiate your words
            like a live minefield,

tiptoeing gingerly beside threatening ones,
one eye always cocked wordward,
just to make sure they don't detonate;

         until you leave gobs
      of blank space with chaotic,
   jagged edges, conjuring
the plate-glass window
   the neighborhood baseball team
      baptized last week;

   until you make folks reach,
   stretch, and struggle to find
   themselves and their lives
   within the aftermath
   of a topless verbal blender;

until you write with this kind
   of brazen abandon,
      you might not be a poet.

© 2015 Todd Jenkins

2 comments:

  1. This may sound inappropriate, strange, or right on point. But I think I feel violated for having read these words. The way you would feel violated if someone just barged in unannounced into your living room with a platter of food and poured it down your throat and you never knew how starved you were until it settled into your stomach. Kinda like that.

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    1. :-) As a friend told me not too long ago, "I'd say I'm sorry for doing that to you, but I'm really not."

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